Sunday, March 8, 2009

Discovering my abilities


Hey Guys,
I back again. This time its' a story by me and ma frnd Ganesh.
Thanks to Satish(Ethi) and Anoop who made this possible.

Please bear with it.

Give it a title after reading it.


Scene No.1

It,s almost twilight. Our hero is sitting in the beach with a pen and book.
The sun is going down and our heroine who is behind a rock comes walking.
She looks at our hero who is staring at her and walks towards him.
As she comes near.
Heroine: Does that had to do something wit me (pointint to hero's book).
Hero: Well, you can see it for y'self (hands over his book).
Heroine: um..hmm... So you write poetry?(sits beside him).
Hero: Oh thank you.
Heroine: Was that abt me?
Hero: (smiles)Yeah.
Heroine: Wat makes u do so?
Hero: Well, whenever i feel lonely i come here look at ppl around i write.
Heroine: Oh.. So it's usual thing..
Hero: Actually today was a little different. This one is special to me(chuckles).
Heroine: (smiles) Ok then, nice to see yo...your poem. Bye.(she starts walking).
Hero: Miss.......
Heroine: (turns back) Anna
Hero: Yeah. Anna.
Anna: And you are?
Hero: Tom.
Anna: Ok.
Tom: Anna,You can have it if you like(hands over the paper).
Anna: Thank you.
Tom: When can i expect to see you again.
Anna: You said you come here often, lets see..
Tom: Hope it happens soon(smiles).
Anna: (Smiles)
Tom: Bye.......
Anna: Bye.

End of Scene 1


Scene No. 2

It's dusk again, a car is blocking a lane. Our second hero coming in his bike halts.

Hero2: What the hell are you doing here?
Driver: We are about to start a play here. Waiting for the audience(sarcastically).
Hero2: I am sorry to say this, this ain't correct place since it's very rare to see ppl here.
Driver: For God's sake don't mess with me. I am already in a bad mood. Can you please drop me in the nearest garage?
Hero2: You want a mechanic or you want to go to garage. Because, if you are looking for a mechanic, I am here.
Driver: Thank God. Have a look at it (shows the car).
Hero2: This ain't a big problem, It will take half an hour.
(works out with the car and smiles)
Hero2: So, that's it.
Driver: Thank you very much.
Hero2: um..hmm...What about my pay?
Driver: Ofcourse, i didn't forget it(goes to the back door and opens)
Driver:How much is your pay?
(our heroine comes out)
Hero2: ( moves towards the back door) Wow (chuckles).
Heroine: How much is it?
Hero2: So, You are the actress of the play is it?
Heroine: (puzzled) what are you talking about?
Hero2: Nothing.... I don;t take money from beautiful ladies(smiles).
Heroine: Oh that's nice of you.
Hero2: I am Andrew and you ar.....
Heroine: I don't tell my name to strangers.
Andrew: (chuckles) then i will call you Miss. Beauty
Miss.Beauty: Thank you very much for your help.
Andrew: It's my pleasure to have helped you.
Miss.Beauty: (gets inside the car) (pointing to driver) you can start now.
Driver: Ok madam (gets into the car as well).
Andrew: (bends near the window) (gives a card to Heroine) This is my card in case you want any help again.
Miss.Beuaty: Thank you.

End of Scene 2




Both our heroes gets well with the heroine and it's a big day (Heroine's Birthday)

It's 8' O clock in the evening. Tom and Anna meets near a restaurant.
Tom: Hi Anna(smiles).
Anna: Hi(smiles).
Tom: I wish you a very happy birthday again.
Anna: Thank you again(smiles).
Tom: I think this is the day.
Anna: What are you talking about?
Tom: (kneels down and gives her roses) I think I Love You.
Anna: I think i heard you correctly.
Tom: Yes you did.
Anna: I don't know what to say now.
Tom: You can take your own time, the thing i want your answer to be positive.
Anna: Okay i got to meet my friend. See you later.
Tom: I thought i would get some time with you.
Anna: I am sorry Tom, I have to go now.
Tom: Okay. Don't forget that i am waiting for your answer.
Anna: Yeah.
Tom: Good Night then.
Anna: Good night . Bye...
Tom: Bye..



Andrew: Hi Miss.Beauty. I wish you a very happy birthday.
Miss.Beuaty: Thank you very much(Hughs and kisses him in the cheek).
Andrew: This is for you (hands over a gift).
Miss.Beauty: Nice of you(smiles). And this is for you(hands over the roses)(smiles).
Andrew: What is this for?
Miss.Beauty: In the begining you looked like a flirt, but you are a very swwet guy(blushes).
Andrew: Are you proposing to me?(chuckles)
Miss.Beuaty: Yes I am(blushes).
Andrew: This is great. I was also thinking for this moment.
Miss.Beauty: (Hughs him) Are you serious?
Andrew: Yes, Miss.Beauty I am.
Miss.Beauty: I never thought it will be so easy.
Andrew: Oh no.. Sorry to disappoint you(smiles).
Miss.Beauty: (hughs very tightly)I Love You.
Andrew: I Love you too.

End Of Scene





A week later, Tom is feeling bad that he is not able to contact Anna after his proposal.

Andrew is very tensed. He shows something probably a photo and talks with most of the guys on the street. He comes to tom and....


Andrew: Have you seen this girl?(shows him the photo)
Tom: Yes i have(surprised).
Andrew: Oh where?
Tom: About a week before near the restaurant. Why are you asking?
Andrew: Oh no.. She is missing for the past two days.
Tom: Oh.. what happened to her?
Andrew: I am not sure. I think someone kidnapped her.
Tom: And you are?
Andrew: I am her boy friend. She proposed to me a week before and now i can't fid where she is(cries).
Tom: (dejected) I am sorry.

Andrew leaves and again starts his talks with others in the street.

Tom is very upset. He too starts to search for her. After two days, he finds that she is being kidnapped by someone. He goes there.
It's 1'O clock in the afternoon. He finds her being tied and a man is sitting beside her, probably a security. He goes behind him and breaks his head with a iron rod. The man pants, gets into his knees and falls down.He unties her and takes her with him.


Tom is shocked to know that those guys have cut her tongue and she could not speak anymore.
But Tom is surprised to see her behave in a little weird manner. He looks after her. She shows her grattitude towards him for his help but behaves as if he is nothing to her.

Andrew gets a message from a person about his lovelace's place and goes there.
Tom is out of the house. Andrew gets very fast into the house and he is happy to see her again.
(He hughs her and both of cries)
Andrew: Come on, we have to leave this place fast.
(she nods and they both leave the place)
Tom sees both of them leaving but doesn't take any efforts to stop them.



Six months later, Andrew marries her and they both get into a new house.
Andrew is leaving for his work.
Andrew: (kisses her) Bye Miss. Beauty.
Miss.Beauty: (Shows a paper saying atleast now call me with my name).
Andrew: As far as I am concerned you are Miss.Beauty(chuckles). Bye.
Miss.Beauty: (waves her hand).
She bids him good bye. Gets into the house and halts at a photo. She cries as she looks at the photo of she and her sister. Both of them are twins, her sister Anna died in an accident jus before her kidnap.

Tom is sitting in the beach with his open and book still wondering what went wrong with Anna. He is still waiting for her answer.


End of the Story


Story and screenplay: Me and Ganesh

Dialogues: Me




Thanks for reading this one guys. Don't forget to give it a name.


I started to write this at around 10 30 pm and now it's 12:21 am.
Have to go and sleep. Please adjust if there are any mistakes in it (As i call it "spelling mistakes" if any).

Hope to see you guys soon.


P.S. I asked you to give a name for it.